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The Dark Woods
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The Dark Woods
The Dark Woods
The pitch black darkness west of the rain forrest is called the dark woods. It is so dark because it is always nighttime in the dark woods; however, the sky is rarely black. The sky is usually dark red, dark blue, or dark purple. The trees are black and each one has 1,000 twisted branches. No one ever goes in the dark woods because of the dangers that lurk within. The grass is heavily coated in poison; if one were to touch the poison, they would die before the next day. The only thing that can survive being touched by the poison are the blood sucking bats. The blood sucking bats are the dead vampires, (their "ghosts") from present day Italy and Germany. (Yes, vampires. Don't judge me. I liked vampires BEFORE all this Twilight Diaries or whatever the fuck.) If the poison nor the bats had killed you, then the trees definitely would had. Each branch is alive, and the branches do not let anyone get past. The trees kill you by wrapping their twisted branches over your throat, and they keep twisting and twisting. They only then drop your corpse.
My Quiet Place is surrounded by The Dark Woods, which is why it is the "quiet" place. It is the most beautiful place in the world, but you need to be dead to get in.
My crappy paint drawing:
The pitch black darkness west of the rain forrest is called the dark woods. It is so dark because it is always nighttime in the dark woods; however, the sky is rarely black. The sky is usually dark red, dark blue, or dark purple. The trees are black and each one has 1,000 twisted branches. No one ever goes in the dark woods because of the dangers that lurk within. The grass is heavily coated in poison; if one were to touch the poison, they would die before the next day. The only thing that can survive being touched by the poison are the blood sucking bats. The blood sucking bats are the dead vampires, (their "ghosts") from present day Italy and Germany. (Yes, vampires. Don't judge me. I liked vampires BEFORE all this Twilight Diaries or whatever the fuck.) If the poison nor the bats had killed you, then the trees definitely would had. Each branch is alive, and the branches do not let anyone get past. The trees kill you by wrapping their twisted branches over your throat, and they keep twisting and twisting. They only then drop your corpse.
My Quiet Place is surrounded by The Dark Woods, which is why it is the "quiet" place. It is the most beautiful place in the world, but you need to be dead to get in.
My crappy paint drawing:
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CHLOEH.- test2
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Re: The Dark Woods
LOLOLOL
twilight diaries...xD
haha.
i wanna visit the dark woods ;O
twilight diaries...xD
haha.
i wanna visit the dark woods ;O
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Re: The Dark Woods
sharon wrote:i wanna visit the dark woods ;O
You'd probably die. xD
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Re: The Dark Woods
I spy several run-on sentences.
;
is your best friend.
Use it.
;
is your best friend.
Use it.
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duckie wrote:I spy several run-on sentences.
;
is your best friend.
Use it.
Thank you, but you don't need to tell me how to write my story.
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Oh, but I didn't.
I told you to use them in general. The only thing I said about the story was that there were, in fact, run-ons.
I told you to use them in general. The only thing I said about the story was that there were, in fact, run-ons.
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I apologise for being rude. I wasn't in... the best mood when I wrote that.
I was just talking to someone before who was like:
"I THOGT U SPELL GOOD. IF U CAN SPELL SO GOOD WHY DID U SPELL REALIZE WRONG. IT'S SPELLED WITH A Z NOT AN S DUMBASS."
Right after I told them I use British spelling.
Google before you type, people.
I'm sorry, I know I should have used a semi-colon in certain places. I was actually thinking about that after I posted it. I'll edit it in now. xD
I was just talking to someone before who was like:
"I THOGT U SPELL GOOD. IF U CAN SPELL SO GOOD WHY DID U SPELL REALIZE WRONG. IT'S SPELLED WITH A Z NOT AN S DUMBASS."
Right after I told them I use British spelling.
Google before you type, people.
I'm sorry, I know I should have used a semi-colon in certain places. I was actually thinking about that after I posted it. I'll edit it in now. xD
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Oh. That's okay
I noticed you used British (Australian, too?) spelling when you said "apologise". ;P
EDIT: That smiley didn't turn out like I thought it would.
I noticed you used British (Australian, too?) spelling when you said "apologise". ;P
EDIT: That smiley didn't turn out like I thought it would.
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I don't know if it would be considered "Australian spelling", but I suppose you're right. xD I like British spelling/accents.
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omg. Not deleting this story because of how ridiculous it is. xD
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